What do you think of this creation of mine?

Question: What do you think of this creation of mine!?

I want to perform this at an open mic night (my FIRST one)!. Would love to get some feedback before I do it!.!.!.

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=MjkaurfYV!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think it's perfect :)Www@QuestionHome@Com