Can someone listen to my audition for me please? Tell me what you think? Critiqu

Question: Can someone listen to my audition for me please!? Tell me what you think!? Critique it!?

I'm going to audition for the musical at school soon!. Can someone please listen to this audition peice I prepared and tell me what you think!?

http://youtube!.com/watch!?v=cv4LtwivAis

I'd really appreciate advice or comments!. Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

constructive criticism;
1!. keep your vowels & throat open on the upper notes
2!. use greater dynamic contrast

compliments;
great tone
excellent vibrato
good support
phrasing & diction very clearWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, you have a nice, delicate yet strong voice, well done :)

My only suggestions would be to gather more air and breath and support from your diaphragm, make sure your whole body is relaxed, especially for the audition, try and create a sound and feeling that reflects you and adds a little bit of your own spice and tone!. also try to listen to yourself to produce a better full, clearer, pure sound - and keep that vibrato up, it`s very lovely!

It was beautiful, keep it up and good luck at your auditions!Www@QuestionHome@Com

u were gr8 here are a few tips

it sounds a little bit nasal, so try to stay away from dairy: like cheese milk!. Drink soy milk
and maybe you need a little more space!. imagine (when you're warming up) that you have an orange stuck in your throat!. this will cause you to open your throat a little bit!.
other than that nice tone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was really good =] my only advice is to just make sure to support from your diaphragm, open your mouth, and just let it flow all in one motion!. it sounded great :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow, i thought that u were really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

i wish i could sing like u :[Www@QuestionHome@Com