What do you think of me doing this monologue? WATCH!?

Question:Cavale from Cowboy Mouth. I'm 14 and i attend Orange County High School of the Arts.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Cavale from Cowboy Mouth. I'm 14 and i attend Orange County High School of the Arts.

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It's nice, good dynamics in voice, in some parts though it seems that you are real and sometimes that you are acting and you know when you are acting you have to be real. Also sometimes your hands and body could co ordinate more with your expression and saying. The camera man was not that good, he/she was showing big part over your head instead of focusing on your expression and some very good moments of your finger movements. Nice, keep practicing!