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Position:Home>Performing Arts> I have written a short piece concerning Bereavement, Love and Friendship and anQuestion:I would love it if you read this piece and gave me comments about it Here is the link to the short piece of writing: http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/200... Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I would love it if you read this piece and gave me comments about it Here is the link to the short piece of writing: http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/200... I read your piece and enjoyed it. I was a little wary at first of reading a random writing, but it was a refreshing yet realistic premise. I could strongly identify with your main character. That is great that your story can transcend gender and sexuality. I would have liked a little more development, but I also understand the desire to keep the work compact. |