I wrote this...is it good?

Question:

I wrote this...is it good?

dont want much just permeable passion
resistense in action
time to find
existence in rations
not askin
to be surrounded by love
show some
i dont feel it at all
its all high piles
of hate and fake smiles
i want something shiny and new
to hold me together like emotional glue

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Cool, keep writing. There is anger and pain in your poem.
You will find you are able to release your innermost feelings through the arts.

Yes, it's good.