Hey! I SUCK at writting poems...But, I wrote one! CAN YOU EDIT AND GIVE ME YOUR

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Hey! I SUCK at writting poems...But, I wrote one! CAN YOU EDIT AND GIVE ME YOUR OPINIONS? SeizeTheDay SaulBell

i had 2 read a book for English and write a poem about it (maybe about 2 lines about each chapter). I have to present it to the class tomorrow & just read it... CAN YOU PLZ EDIT / CHANGE / DO W/E YOU HAVE TO - TO MAKE IT BETTER?

You Can??t March in a Straight Line to Victory{TITLE}

Learning to Seize the Day
Is what stood in Wilhelm??s way

Of an acting career
A Wedding Cheer
A ??I love you?? from his father
And financial assistance to carry him further

Remaining in the Here-and-Now
Prevented him from the life he would have endowed

But lost in memory

Made him trust one of his ??enemies??
Destroy him financially
Disappoint his father
And act unwisely

The death of a stranger
Opened the eyes of this hopeful ??actor??

What Becomes of Willhelm
Is left for the reader to find out

Needed: URGENT HELP
Not needed: Someone to tell me to do my own hw b/c I will kill u if u do - I just spent 2 hours writting this wut looks like a simple poem! editing

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7 months ago
lost in memory - is from the book... im not gonna change it...

financial assitance - should i change it to coinage

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 7 months ago
lost in memory - is from the book... im not gonna change it...

financial assitance - should i change it to coinage