What do you think of my song?

Question:

What do you think of my song?

Its my first one - the music is really pretty, sweet, and delicate. But what do you think of the words?

Verse 1 :

Have you ever had a dream
Hidden deep within you?
Have you ever had a dream
So fictional yet so true?
Have you ever had to listen
To those people that think
It could never happen?
But yet you cant let go
Its bolted to your heart.

Refrain :
I'm gonna hold on
Till the last second
Im gonna keep reaching
for my stars
Im gonna keep hoping
That someday I'll prove you wrong
Watch me fly - fly away.

Any suggestions for the second verse? O, its talking about how so many people have dreams of doing great things someday, but somebody always convinces them it could never happen. So ya

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hey Kelsey,

Very nice. The word "bolted" gave me a 'jolted'. Perhaps you could say ..."it's deep in your heart", just a thought. Keep writing, by they way, do we all get a free MP3 when it comes out?