Would anyone like to criticize my new song for me?

Question:

Would anyone like to criticize my new song for me?

http://www.myspace.com/theskyespectacula...

I would like to hear some feedback. This is my demo of the song ("Nicole's Song") , so yeah, i know I have some work to make it perfect. But any feedback? Do you like it? Don't like it? Don't be afraid, just tell me what you think, it will be much appreciated!

Joel

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Intro is a bit long but otherwise nice ;)