I wrote this poem, can I get opinions please?

Question:

I wrote this poem, can I get opinions please?

Bullet

This gun in my hand
My heart pounds in my ears
Ready to blow you away
and end all your years

My hands shaking slightly
My eyes fill with tears
I pull the trigger
and end all my fears

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6 months ago
The gun falls to the ground
I hear you cry out
My worries escape me
and I'm left with no doubt.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 months ago
The gun falls to the ground
I hear you cry out
My worries escape me
and I'm left with no doubt.