Help with dancing! video included?

Question: Help with dancing! video included!?

hey yall!

so today i was bored and was dancing around and decided to take a video of it and send it to me boyfriend!.

well im tryin to learn to dance better!.!.!.lol its hard!

so i just wanted yalls opinions///advice on this video of my dancing!

please be serious!.!.!.!. :) i will choose best answer!

thanks!

also anything else i could try!?

here's the link:

http://s10!.photobucket!.com/albums/a148/O!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You are really good with your hips!. You are a good dancer, but you asked for advice, so here it is:

You could be a little sharper in places!. Since you are dancing to a hip hop song, you want to be a little sharper coming out of your body rolls, hard to explain, its like "roooolllll and pop!" also some of your arm and leg movements are a little sloppy, they either need to be sharp or smooth and sexy!. You are sometimes landing right in the middle of these two which looks sloppy!.

also, sometimes when you move or switch position, you lose the beat!. You catch it again, but losing it for that little bit of time looks sloppy!. You don't do this everytime, but enough to be noticable!. Try to keep dancing to the beat no matter what you are doing!. Its like you stop dancing to switch around and then start again!. Just keep dancing!.

also, in your body roll you need to pop your chest a little more!. You have this great roll start in the hips but fizzle out by the time it finishes!.

You're a good dancer, keep it up! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey!
dang girl you work that bootay!
hahaha lol
i wish i could do that!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you look great!. maybe learn a few more moves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com