Question Home

Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Can someone help me find my muse?


Question:

Can someone help me find my muse?

I had him this morning but, got interrupted and now he's gone..... (sigh)

I started working on a "write" I started almost a year ago as a challenge and have failed misurably but, I'm now determined to finish the freakin' think even if it kills me! (not literally of coarse *^_^*)

It's about a cop who becomes a detective and has been after a certain "mob" member his whole career. He has 2 days till retirement and gets killed but, returns from the dead to put this certain mobster behind bars...

What do you think? & Do you have any suggestions for this poem?

All the Best, Shad @)~>~

Additional Details

2 weeks ago
Ok, as requested by Todd (here goes....)

This is what I have so far but, everytime I go back to it, I get frustrated LOL

Yup, there it sat, oldest cold case in years
Mario Dinghotti now, a failure to appear
Mofia scum, (lowlife waste of space)
Two days till retirement,one final crack at the case

Last week I was beamin?? no perp was safe
Slammed behind bars to face their fate
(Tch), Mario Dinghotti that freakin?? scum bag
To now prove his guilt would take all time I had

Eh, give me a break no evidence is flying
I ask, I check up and still "vics" are dying
Oh man, but, the trash I've tossed to the curb
N.Y.'S finest lawyer convicting "cons" and "perps"

After all the threats recieved
I was put under "PO protection"
Discised, working under the assumed
avoiding my own assassination

Mortified was I, as i read the front page
I was'nt the least surprised one bit
"Woman Found Slain after Mofia Rage"
Mario, Jake and the rest of the outfit


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 2 weeks ago
Ok, as requested by Todd (here goes....)

This is what I have so far but, everytime I go back to it, I get frustrated LOL

Yup, there it sat, oldest cold case in years
Mario Dinghotti now, a failure to appear
Mofia scum, (lowlife waste of space)
Two days till retirement,one final crack at the case

Last week I was beamin?? no perp was safe
Slammed behind bars to face their fate
(Tch), Mario Dinghotti that freakin?? scum bag
To now prove his guilt would take all time I had

Eh, give me a break no evidence is flying
I ask, I check up and still "vics" are dying
Oh man, but, the trash I've tossed to the curb
N.Y.'S finest lawyer convicting "cons" and "perps"

After all the threats recieved
I was put under "PO protection"
Discised, working under the assumed
avoiding my own assassination

Mortified was I, as i read the front page
I was'nt the least surprised one bit
"Woman Found Slain after Mofia Rage"
Mario, Jake and the rest of the outfit