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What do you think of the plot of this story I'm writing?

It takes place in ancient Greece, in Delphi. The main character is the queen of Delphi. Her husband, the king, was just murdered on a diplomatic mission to Naxos, leaving her as the sole ruler of a city-state that is on the verge of war. She knows that there is almost no hope for victory in war, since they are not a very war-inclined city-state, yet even though she undersands that, she swears to avenge her fallen husband and her guards, who died saving her from a scouting party from Naxos. The rest of the story is about her struggle during the war, faced with advisors trying to seize the throne, and the loneliess that threatens to consume her.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Good. There could be some tweaks to make it a bit more interesting, and it reminds me of the book " The cry of the Icemark." Make it exciting, because I never got through The Cry of the Icemark because I got bored in the end of the middle.