Question:
What do you think...be honest?
I wrote 2 poems please read them and tell your opion. The first is"Nightmare",the is called "No Longer".
1) They told you it's going down tonight. You pray that you don't get hurt from this fight. They start to throw stones they giggle at your broken bones. I feel your pain. They think it's a game. They see your tears but they don't fear. They know it's not fare but they don't care. They laugh when you fall. They smile when you bail. They watch you cry and they want you to die. They see the blood roll off you head. They leave now cause your dead.
2.We used to talk all day but lately not the same way. All though you didn't ride my bus, we were friends that we could trust. Now we say hi as we pass by. Thats all and all it will ever be. Because it's no longer we it's just me. Without the you just me and myself. I see your torn picture on my bookshelf. I hate how you are now so don't give a bow.I don't know where you are.I am not sure if you are near or far.But i hope your close because
Additional Details2 weeks ago
I miss you the most. You are still my friend. Now and till the end.
Those are my poems, I wrote the rest in detail because I ran out of room up top. Please comment. Thanbks for your tips/ opions.
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2 weeks agoI miss you the most. You are still my friend. Now and till the end.
Those are my poems, I wrote the rest in detail because I ran out of room up top. Please comment. Thanbks for your tips/ opions.