Another Saturday nite poem I think you'll enjoy. Comments Please???

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Another Saturday nite poem I think you'll enjoy. Comments Please???

Hell

Locked away in my own personal hell,
Much more secure than a prisoners cell.
No where to run, no where to hide,
I feel my sanity starting to slide.

No guards are needed to watch over me,
There is no need for askeleton key.
No other inmates with whom I might speak,
Not even a mouse could manage a squeak.

If you've not figured out where that I am,
I'm closed up as tight as a salt water clam.
Lost in my head, with no where to go,
I am so tired of this same boring show.

When you've gone crazy, over the hill,
Doctors prescribe, you eat the pills.
The voices inside me soon start to shout,
Stop eating those things, we want to come out.

Eating the pills, make you feel slow,
Stop eating them, and I'm ready to go.
But then demons soon come around,
They've taken over, my mind their playground.

Locked in my head, away from the beast,
not too bad a place, it's quiet at least.
nothing to say, nowhere to go,
Guess you might say, on with the show.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: !! I LOVE this Poem!!

-Especially the last line, "Guess you might say, on with the show". Brilliant! The endings of poems I believe to be their strongpoint, and you nailed it! I Loved this. I'd be heartbroken if your work were stolen, you are very talented so be careful where you put your work.

Keep writing, absolutely!!!!!!!!!!!!!