Please read the POEM and tell me what you think?

Question:

Please read the POEM and tell me what you think?

What title would you give it? Suggestions and comments will be welcome. Thank you.

Her sweet presence makes my body vibrate
This faithful love never departs my soul,
With our feeble union left to fate,
She graciously dwells in my cherished hold.

She is a tender breath of fresh soft air;
I breathe in her dear love, feeling passion;
She arouses me with wonder and care.
Wavering I muse my true companion

If she departs my soul I will not sleep
Her lost presence is felt great in my heart.
Sad and restless my spirit will weep
Never satisfying the deep bare part.

Her love my soul does know painfully well
To stay with her I do not think is hell.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Sorry...I'm no poet...I just don't like it. Especially the last 2 lines. Can you do something not quite so sappy?