"Broken" please read and give your thoughts?

Question:

"Broken" please read and give your thoughts?

This is a poem I wrote when I was broken hearted and I also wrote it on behalf of a dear friend who also had the same fate..please read and let me know what you guys think..if it needs improvement or changes please let me know..thanks

Broken in pieces as you can see

Hopeless and drained of all tranquility

We are the wounded and bleeding

We want a bandage we are in needing

It can drive a man insane

to have to deal with this kind of pain

A woman who does'nt feel woman enough

because of the break up being so tough

tears fill the eyes of the sad

Our minds reminising on what we once had

We want to go back and change whatever we can

just to undo the damage before our lovers ran

We search for a place where we can scream

because we know this is not just a bad dream

it is very real and it hurts like hell

inside this darkness is where we dwell

It feels so lonely I just wanna die

My failure is what I cannot deny

I am broken

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ...dang! I like it a lot. You had wonderful words in there, yet it still had a simple side of it so that you don't get too confused too much. I like it! Good job...

...and as I was reading this, it reminded me of my past, terrible relationships. I hope whoever caused you to be broken gets kicked. :)