Just wrote a poem think its my best yet!? opinions?

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Just wrote a poem think its my best yet!? opinions?

Story Book Horror
Her life is like a story, a tale of misery
The pages filled with heat break of what could never be.
Some chapters never written a secret left untold
The lies are piling up, and hatred she beholds.
Scribbles on the paper, the part when it went wrong
A pen cannot erase and he knew that all along.
He sits enwrapped in thoughts of all that he has took
His name is mentioned more than once inside that doleful book.
The setting that she lives in each day is like a chore
In her house, there lies misfortune behind each and every door.

Thats all i really have so far!
Britz

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm not an expert when it comes to poetry. But just reading it, i find rhythm every two stanzas and that makes it "musical" for me. And I think that's what makes it so nice to "hear." Keep writing!