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Horse Poem! Be my fan if you like!?

In the sky, we're scorched by the sun, but horses don't care they'll run and run.

As we limp, and fall behind, horses come and try to find you.

Sweet, and smelly, fast and hugable, I know horses are so luvable!

I wnat a horse, when I grow up, not a kitten or a pup.

I want to ride when I move away, me and my horse will gallop all day!

I want to know the human-horse-bond, because of horses, I am fond.

I'm going to know, what they love, if I'm blessed from heaven above.


It's kinda short, please don't be too critical, I already know it sucks :(


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It DOESN'T suck, and if anyone's being critical, it's you. You obviously have a passion for horses, and while I don't share in that passion, I admire it.
You also have a passion for poetry, which you have put to good use.
Oh, and, by the way, publically announcing that your poetry sucks in your opinion only persuades others to believe the same, that is, when it doesn't invoke pity, which is just as bad. So keep up your own self-esteem, because I don't think anything you write could suck, unless you made it so on purpose.

Keep up the awesome work!!