I wrote some lyrics...again...what do you think?

Question:

I wrote some lyrics...again...what do you think?

I'm not trying to make it in the music business, and honestly I don't care if they seem cliche. I just like to write them and share them.~

I do my best
With what I got
I must confess
It??s not a lot
I give my all
To let you know
You??ll never have
To let me go
I hope and dream
For better days
What I say I mean
We??ll stay this way
We??re gonna make it
wait and see
We??re gonna make it
you and me

Hold me close
I??ll hold you closer
Never let go
Don??t lost your grip
Believe me
I ain??t no poser
Believe the words
That fall from my lips
When I say

I love you
I need you
I breathe you
I bleed you
The world without your face
Won??t be worth my while
The world without your voice
And the world without your smile
Won??t be the same
Won??t be right
Will be dark
Won??t be light

I do my best
With what I got
I must confess
It??s not a lot
I give my all
To let you know
You??ll never have
To let me go
I hope and dream
For better days
What I say I mean
We??ll stay this way
We??re gonna make it
wait and see
We??re gonna make it
you and me

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: great job!! I really liked it and had a lot of fun reading it. Oh, how I would love it if a guy wrote something like that for me!!
lol..
You'll be famous someday, so don't give it up!!

Loving, needing, breathing, and bleeding your poetry (har har),

rebel angel