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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Who likes poems?Question: Who likes poems?Springs gone and winters here Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I liked it, but my very first thought was "This needs editing". Editing in the sense of apostrophes and verb usage and the like. Another thought was that you used a lot of cliches that have been overused by many other poets or poet wannabes. It has a lot of meaning, which I admire and encourage. Though a couple spots were rough, overall your poem had exceptional rhythm and very good rhyme. I can relate to this poem, as it is bittersweet but not without hope, which I despise in any poem, because there is always hope, everywhere. So very good job and definitely never put down your pen. Admiringly, rebel angel |