Song lyrics, please comment...?

Question:

Song lyrics, please comment...?

The Sun Shall Rise Again by Saint John

Pressed against your lips I remember
For tomorrow always seemed outstretched
"Die in arms tranquil" you once rested in me--
You shimmered alongside angels with such ease...

For I believed in something more than myself,
Forever never seemed long enough.
As you lied with your heart intwined with mine,
Questions answered why one would live...
For on days like these, it's easy to believe
That with you, I knew--
The sun shall rise again...

The streets once paved with ounces of gold
Each step we took, each promise told
Leading us closer to a destined light
Whispers bonded with all of our might--
We were one...

'Till a harsh wind blew of tears undue
I'd fight the wave of a life unpaved
To know the truth that pushes me away from you
Into a life of sin--
Please my darling, hear me when....I say
The sun shall rise again...

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(speechless)

The message is more important after all.
The optimism, the hope ...

As about metrics, rhymes, etc - let them rest as ETC., just for someone, of course, if you want to publish it as a poem.
I'm wondering about the melody ... It must be something as special as the lyrics!