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Please read. and comment...if you really want ten points....?

i posted this a long time ago but not that many people reviewed it. i happen to like it, and talked with the person who wrote it...

author- a friend

title-daddy's little girl

So many tears shed.
So many children murdered in their beds.
Family members cry,
As they watch each other die.

He chains them to the walls,
And slices them with knives.
Only she can here their terrified calls,
But it's still too soon to take their lives.

So many tears shed.
So many children murdered in thier beds.
Family members cry,
As they watch each other die.

Rest your head little girl
And go to sleep.
Pay no attention to the screaming,
It'll be over sooner than you think.

So many tears shed.
So many children murdered in their beds.
Family members cry,
Because she's next to die.

Get back to bed girl.
Soon enough you'll be in my world.
Innocent eyes grow wide;
Terror builds up inside.
Under the covers she trys to hide.

So many tears shed.
So many children murdered in their beds.
Little girl don't cry,
Everyone else is gone.
Now it's time for you to die.

"Don't you want to see your sister Connie?
Hunny open the door.
Don't you want to spend time with Mommy?
RIGHT now you little whore!"

"But everyone is dead now
And I don't want to be.
Daddy please don't kill me!"

One night a man went insane.
His whole family died in vain.
Till they took their last breathe,
They were in pain.
And as he strangled his daughter,
He told her she was to blame.

He looked down at what he'd done:
Taken her out of this world.
Then he actually smiled.
She was still daddy's little girl.

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1 week ago
i give all your reviews to her.....


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
i give all your reviews to her.....