"Makes me wanna die" poem please read and comment?

Question:

"Makes me wanna die" poem please read and comment?

It just kills me

I cannot breathe

take this sword if you will

and cut out my heart

it hurts too much to keep inside

twisted inside it is this torment

a creature that has taken over

I can't breathe when I see you

it's not fair

noone warned me

I wish they had

what can I do now

I'm down on my knees but I have run out of tears

I hate what you've done

when will you get your demise

all alone I have suffered this loss

I sit here in the dark feeling pathetic

while you are out there without a care

I'm in this prison of fear

so afraid to open my eyes

This burning in my chest

makes me wanna die

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love it, it reminds me of my first broken heart. Thanks for submiting this.