My song lyrics, please comment...?

Question:

My song lyrics, please comment...?

OXYGEN
by Saint John
from the forthcoming album "All That I Bleed"

Added light
to eyes yet open
A hand to touch
A heart to feel...

Moving closer
Seizing flesh
Upon the brow,
Fighting circumstance

Easy to resist when science is my enemy...

A shaded light
Exposing contours
Fingerprints--
My evidence

Twisted time
Breath to breath
Inching forward,
My dear ecstasy...

Hard to resist when science is the enemy...

I, these lungs fight themselves
Each one, each breath for you
A question of space
An answer in room?
For a surprise as to what may bloom...

Hard to resist when you are my oxygen...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is awesome! it's deep and it really got to me, in a good way, not an emotional one. It was a great song! But I'd love to HEAR it too!