Please view and comment my poetry?

Question:

Please view and comment my poetry?

I'm really looking for some honest commentary. If this were a portfolio, what would you say?

http://girl_with_no_name.blog....

all written by a 13 year old

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1 week ago
http://girl_with_no_name.blog....

1 week ago
its
blog.com
don't forget the '.com' at the end, right after 'blog'

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
http://girl_with_no_name.blog....