Your opinion on my poem, please?

Question:

Your opinion on my poem, please?

'My stolen dream, my betrayal'

My stolen dream, my betrayal
Lost in the misty never
Like an alchemist trying to create gold
To make hot summer from the winter's cold

Bringing you back so hard I tried
Can I by myself the past revive?
A past I'm struggling hard to beautify
Broken dreams put back together, my eyes to mystify

My illusions, in a collage to bring me into confusion
A past I create, so I can drink its infusion
The flavour, the perfume, my vision's apparel
My stolen dream, my betrayal

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is simple, and deep. I like it a lot.....