Question:
Poem 11 - 5-7-06?
In NYC a guy called Dave
Was in love with a girl called Maeve
She didn't know she was his fave
Until he asked her to a rave
Through the crowd the way he lead
Till he was met by gang leader Ned
"Watch it, punk", he angrily said
But his blood lust had to be fed
To his partner the signal he gave
He knew just how the crowd would behave
When he sent them bullets in a wave
But the best for last he did save
The surviving youngsters quickly fled
The others lay and slowly bled
The ground became a deeper red
Most of them were already dead
They didn't think he'd be so brave
But her life he had to save
In doing so his own he gave
And made it to an early grave
Now Maeve is all grown up and wed
To a handsome man called Fred
But late at night when she's in bed
She remembers her true love now dead
And the one who was so brave
Lies alone in his cold grave
To the night he'll be a slave
Till he is once again with Maeve
Additional Details1 week ago
zoeksalamander - the meanest guy in my school was called Edward-Joseph - usually shortened to Eddie-Joe but a lot of people called him Ned
girlie rock - the "ave's" and "ed's" are alternated - verses 1, 3, 5 and 7 have "ave's" and verses 2, 4 and 6 have "ed's". so what do mean SUDDENLY!!!!!!!!!!!
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1 week agozoeksalamander - the meanest guy in my school was called Edward-Joseph - usually shortened to Eddie-Joe but a lot of people called him Ned
girlie rock - the "ave's" and "ed's" are alternated - verses 1, 3, 5 and 7 have "ave's" and verses 2, 4 and 6 have "ed's". so what do mean SUDDENLY!!!!!!!!!!!