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What do you think of the poem faded pictures? please reply!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think it's a rather nice poem. You have good rhythmn, and meter. You need to break up your lines of poetry to make it easier on the reader's eyes, and to give your poem better form. You left out a word in the line "wherever you need to be", and in the sentence "Pictures that make you laugh and smile and take your breath away". There's too many ands in one sentence. Other than that two thumbs up.