My new poem, make a suggestion, please?

Question:

My new poem, make a suggestion, please?

Stinkee

Mike ran, pulled a pistol
Told Stinkee to get the vitriol.
Jed fled the bed in time to unwind
And so they met at the foxhole.

Mike loaded with bullets to spare
Told Stinkee to "weigh in" on tare,
Jed laughed at the gaff with Jack's hazmat in tact,
And Stinkee sank through the chair.

Mike pointed the Walther P
Stinkee nodded, rather inobtrusively.
Jed fed the cred that Jack's mac attack
Was nothing more than soiled laundry.

Mike cocked the P38
Stinkee hollared, "no, wait!"
Jed said "I bled instead"--the past Jack cracked,
Would constitute a snake.

Mike fired the gun away
Stinkee ducked, yelled "On Belay!"
Jed's dead, they said whilst Jack stacks tacks on cracks,
And 3 peons went on their way.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like the poem. Well written.
One of the only suggestions that i can think of is that you should look at your rhyming in the first stanza. It doesnt really stay true to the sound in the second line.
Sencond Stanza, very good
Third Stanza, good as well
and so on and so forth

One other thing, the name, stinkee. Any special purpose in this name? or could you change it to something of the same sound? the name just sounds a little odd with the poem. Totally my opinion, keep it if you like it! :)

Hope I helped!