Since I've been left to my own devices today, the poems they are a flowin'. Com

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Since I've been left to my own devices today, the poems they are a flowin'. Comments????

limbo

Cannot see, all light is gone, a nap I'll never wake,
Hands won't move, cannot feel, a thirst I cannot slake.
What has happened, where am I , time does not exist,
Falling fast, going down, a place i can't resist

Where am I, stuck in limbo, not heaven nor it hell,
Just a place for misfits, at least no brimstone smell.
A feeling of uneasiness, late with no place to go,
No sound, no feeling, just nothing don't you know?

Eternity is forever, a place without any pleasure,
Nothing but my memories, the extent of my treasure.
Take me God, this stillness, I can't take for evermore,
Back when I had my life, now I know the score.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: do you ever stop writing excellent poems?

they're all great..