A poem about how break ups can make you feel, what do u think?

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A poem about how break ups can make you feel, what do u think?

My tears they fall,
Fall to my feet,
Welling up around me,
Rising oh so deep,
Where have you gone,
My love my soul,
My air my sun,
My one my all,
I see only darkness,
My vision so bleak,
My heart in tatters,
My mind so weak,
I am not whole,
I am empty so hollow,
I have no guide,
No promise to follow,
My tears still rise,
Up past my feet,
I drown in my sorrows,
For they welled up to deep.

I am now forever incomplete.

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1 week ago
It is meant to be dramatic.
I know its to the extreem but people can still feel this way.
I am sorry some of you did not like it.
To the ones who did, thank you.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
It is meant to be dramatic.
I know its to the extreem but people can still feel this way.
I am sorry some of you did not like it.
To the ones who did, thank you.