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Your thoughts...?

This is my poem. I wrote it. I don't rhyme, please don't flame. This relates to me. Tell me what you think. Thanks in advance.

"Angels and Demons"

The path that I'm walking
Is full of twists and turns,
Wolves in sheeps clothing
And twisted beauty.

The angels that watch
From up above in the heavens,
Sing their song of glory
As I move along.

The demons from down under
Try to sway me to walk a different way,
To release the rage within.

Angels and demons collide
In one war
As I fight for my own control.

Time passes me by
As the war rages on,
Deep within my very soul.

The feelings I get
Are so strong
And so unlike me,
Feelings of hate and passion.

The angels and demons
Are creating a storm
That must be released soon
Or I surely will lose all sanity.

My angels and demons.

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1 week ago
It's a war we must all fight sometimes. I'm right smack in it right now and the angels are winning but the demons have sneak attacks on me. Hehe. Thanks so far, guys! =D

1 week ago
Susan--
Thanks for the concern, but I sure am fine. I'm being counseled by my friends. They're good counselors to me. I feel like I'm already starting to let the angels win out and banish the demons to the utter depths of hell so they can never bother me again.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
It's a war we must all fight sometimes. I'm right smack in it right now and the angels are winning but the demons have sneak attacks on me. Hehe. Thanks so far, guys! =D