Question:
Please comment my poem?
Life's like a story, it's made up of words
Nothing too simple and nothing too hard
Life's like a play, composed up of acts
Based on opinions, conception, and facts
Life's like a poem, with stanzas and lines
It can change into anything if you just give it time
Life's like a movie, it's constantly rolling
It never stops so don't be controlling
Life isn't fair, and life can be tough
Don't give up, don't tell me you've had enough
Life's like a story a movie a play
It can be what you want it, whatever you say
It can be a crazy, it can be sane, so try your hardest, it won't be in vain
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awesome poem, i like all types of poetry, but my favorites are the ones that rhyme, especially if it works out like this. Your rhythm and metaphors are great. keep writing:)