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This one I wrote some time ago..comments?

From the Dark
How every candle light does speak
Through the dark with muted tones
Love's lost voice in you I find
I no longer am alone.
The candles find expression
Wthin the deepest gloom
And whispers its sweet promise
Of morning coming soon.
That promise I have found in you
A path to lead me from the night
To still my heart from ache and want
And give these blind eyes sight
To view the wrold and see it true
And speak the promise I found in you.

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1 week ago
"Cheesy..? laughing..I can handle cheesy..better than "crappy"...laughing

1 week ago
yes..a love poem....my attempt at a "sonnet"..laughing..(big eye-roll)

1 week ago
from the dark is the title.. it does only have 14 lines...you are right probably about the meter though


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
"Cheesy..? laughing..I can handle cheesy..better than "crappy"...laughing