My poem called "The Night Sky" RATE IT WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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My poem called "The Night Sky" RATE IT WHAT DO YOU THINK?

IM LOOKING AT THE NIGHT SKY
I CAN SEE THOSE STARS TWINKLING IN MY EYE
I CAN SEE THAT BIG BRIGHT MOON SHINING
I CAN HEAR THOSE WOLVES WHINING
I CAN FEEL THAT NIGHT BREEZE BLOWING
I CAN SEE ALL OF ITS BEAUTY SHOWING
I CAN SEE EVERYTHING FROM HERE
AND YET IM NOWHERE NEAR
WHERE ITS ALL TAKING PLACE
ALL UP THERE IN SPACE.
I CAN ONLY IMAGINE HOW IT WOULD BE UP THERE
UNFORTUNATELY ALL I CAN DO IS GAZE AND STARE
AND HOPE ONE DAY THAT I CAN GO UP THERE AND EXPLORE
AND HOPEFULLY I WILL GET TO SEE MORE
MORE THAN I COULD EVER DREAM FOR
EVEN THOUGH ITS BILLIONS AND BILLIONS OF MILES AWAY
NIGHT AND DAY
AND EVEN THOUGH I CAN'T GET ANY CLOSER TO IT THAN I AM NOW
I STILL CAN LOOK AT IT AND WONDER HOW
ONE DAY IM GONNA GET UP THERE TO WHERE ITS ALL TAKING PLACE
UP THERE IN SPACE
I WANT TO TOUCH YOU NIGHT SKY
I WANT TO SEE ALL OF YOUR BEAUTY IN MY EYE
I WANT TO SEE ALL OF YOUR SPARKLING DIAMOND STARS
I WANT TO SEE ALL YOUR PLANETS:Mercury,Venus,Earth, and Mars,
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1 week ago
here's the rest of the poem......

JUPITER,SATURN,URANUS, NEPTUNE,AND PLUTO
I WANT TO SEE ALL OF YOUR BEAUTY GLOW
AND MAYBE ONE DAY I CAN MAKE IT SO
SO I BID YOU GOODBYE FOR TONIGHT, NIGHT SKY
AND I WILL SEE YOU AGAIN AND MAYBE EVEN SHARE YOU WITH A SPECIAL GUY
BUT EVEN IF I SHARE YOU WITH SOMEONE ELSE I KNOW I'LL BE FINE
BECAUSE I KNOW THAT YOU WILL ALWAYS BE MINE.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
here's the rest of the poem......

JUPITER,SATURN,URANUS, NEPTUNE,AND PLUTO
I WANT TO SEE ALL OF YOUR BEAUTY GLOW
AND MAYBE ONE DAY I CAN MAKE IT SO
SO I BID YOU GOODBYE FOR TONIGHT, NIGHT SKY
AND I WILL SEE YOU AGAIN AND MAYBE EVEN SHARE YOU WITH A SPECIAL GUY
BUT EVEN IF I SHARE YOU WITH SOMEONE ELSE I KNOW I'LL BE FINE
BECAUSE I KNOW THAT YOU WILL ALWAYS BE MINE.