NOT the same?

Question:

NOT the same?

The same way
The same hands
The same place
in which I stand

The same touch
The same eyes
The same love
I call mine

The same pain
But to a higher degree
The same thing
But the girl wasn't me

The same house
The same hunger fed
The same four walls
The same damn bed

The same you
Not the same, you see
Because the same you
made a different me

By: amber alaniz (me)

opinion?

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