I'm writing alot today. Depression is good for something. comments???

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I'm writing alot today. Depression is good for something. comments???

waste of time

Ebony hair on her pillow pleading,
Tan skin glistens, ripe for feeding.
Eyes of green, deep with meaning,
Lips like cherries, glossy, gleaming.

Why do this, betray her love?
Bodies together, like hand in glove.
Betrayals a sin, never forgot,
My stomach, tied up in a knot.

Life will never be the same,
Once your in, play the game.
You know better, what the hell
Fallen under her sweet spell.

Decision's made, made your bed,
Man has hunger, must be fed.
Life is made to take the chance,
How it happened, happenstance.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I liked the rhymes and the way they flowed threw the poem.You are so talented; that everything you do' is so unique ;and so very special.... loved it so much ,,,,,,,,,,, see ya,later,,,