This is the final rewrite of this poem, hope you like. Comments please.?

Question:

This is the final rewrite of this poem, hope you like. Comments please.?

I am

I am the beast that denies you peace,
Seek in your soul and cry for release.
I am the darkness crawling in the night,
The silent invader, stealing all thats right.

I am the plague that haunts your dreams,
Beg and plead and still a silent scream.
I am the hunter, reaper of lost souls,
You the hunted, now you'll pay my toll.

I am legion, the keeper of all pain,
You, the loser, the thing I most disdain.
I am master of all that I survey,
You got lost one sorrowful day.

I am the beginning, middle and end,
You the beggar, the one who sinned.
I have come for you,
And everyone else too.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it is very interesting i haven't heard a poem as perfect as that in ages it is the best!