Question:
Another of my poem.Like it?
The pain is too much for me to bear.
A silent whisper, a silent tear.
A pair of eyes that see the past,
How I had longed for that moment to last.
Eye: hollow, lifeless, full of sorrow.
Hoping to see a brighter tomorrow.
Eye: flooding each time they see,
How far you are, how far from me.
I can't hold back those falling tears.
Let go,let go of all the fear.
The pain's too much for me to bear.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
WOW very nice good job