What do you think of my peom- Please be honest.?

Question:

What do you think of my peom- Please be honest.?

IT
It draws us together,
It tears us apart.
It marks the end of a beginning,
Or does it simply make it start?
Unquestionable and divine
It charts a lineage for big and small
Controlling strings that thus connect us all.

It builds us tall
it makes us fall
And yet completely unknown if I can change it all.
It runs my life, behind curtains of chaotic turns.
In all our lives it guides us, pushes and controls us.

So, i must ask, what is IT?
it is nothing to fear

It makes my purpose rather clear

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1 week ago
I'm a young poet- im 13 :)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 1 week ago
I'm a young poet- im 13 :)