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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Another poem I've written. How's it?Question: Another poem I've written. How's it?Choking,Choking for love. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your poem is OK. But did you try to imagine how good it would hear or read, if the repetations could be avoided ? Choking for your love. Longing for your touch. Oh, why did the pain cease ? |