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I have a poem, I need to know what you think.?

In darken lands, man strives.
Hand to mouth, he survives.
Good and evil war, one is slew.
Into moon beams a soul did flew.
Now stands alone, unknown one thrives.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really enjoyed the first two lines. "Did flew" is incorrect grammar though. I liked it all together. I would have loved to see more details. I thought it to be a little too short. But it was pretty cool. 6/10