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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> I have a poem, I need to know what you think.?Question: I have a poem, I need to know what you think.?In darken lands, man strives. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: is english your native language? or is your convention to use words incorrectly? I don't mean to be harsh, but any time someone rhymes with poor grammar, I can't help but see it as laziness. part of my education, I suppose, to edit edit edit and be perfect. your theme, however, I think has promise. there's a story there--take your time and bring it out by starting all over. |