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Can u relate????

i wrote this poem 10yrs ago....
Well if I die along this road I'm on, I'm trusting you all to carry me home, cause I've come a long way but I've got far to go.
I hitched a ride on a moving dove, she sang of long lost loves and lonely nights,rocked me to sleep and calmed my fears.
Had breakfast with a dog with a napsack,stories of far away he told,gave me a smile and sent me on my way.
Shared lunch with a jackl rabbit who spoke of gentleness and soft things,nibbled my ear and hurried off.
An owl winked at me and called me pretty. said he was wise and ought to know about suck things.
Bathed with a catfish who tickled my toes and told me of mermaids. but he swam too deep and disappeared.
A turtle taught me about peace of mind. we settled down for a nap and slept a long time.
The wild horse gave me a ride. ran so fast and jumped and so high. she said be free.
Helped the fox catch dinner...you must be cunning and quick to live long said he.
there's more...how do i publish it?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I would have liked to see how it ended. Sounds pretty good! I dont know how to get it published but I thought it to be very creative. There was only one line in which it made no sense to me.. "said he was wise and ought to know about suck things" What are "suck things?" Rhyming isnt too much to my liking but because the idea was really creative, I liked it. Really would have loved to see the ending.... 7.5/10