Do you like the way I ended this song, "Can I trust you with my heart"

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Do you like the way I ended this song, "Can I trust you with my heart"?

When you meet that certain someone, You've been searchin hard to find......It's a new love full of passion, That can some times make you blind. I don't mind being swept away, If I know right from the start.......So before we go much further, Can I trust you with my heart? In the time we've spent together, I have learned to trust in you. So many things you've given....Before I even asked you to. But reality and romance, Are sometimes far apart. So, what I really need to know is this... Can I trust you with my heart? Can I cast my cares upon you? Can you stand the heavy load? Can I count on you to walk me, down that long and winding road? If you promise me these simple things, I can guarantee.....You can always count on me. When two hearts slowly surrender, and are sworn to understand... is it possible between a woman & a man that they can always be best friends... or is this just the way this is suppose to be... can I trust you with my heart.. what do I get for all of this...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: beautiful...a question in all our hearts well put