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Door's Open...Come In!?

Well friends..... my fiance is out of the country(he does a job abroad and has recently got it).there's a
'kinda engagement' over here....and the worst part of the story is he'snt coming! I've written a poem4him...just tell me if i shud send him and is it a nice1?here it goes...

"Im waiting and I'll be waiting....
for you to return im waiting!
No matter how long you take....
but let not my poor heart break!
For that is our life's beautiful day....
and i cant think of your absence in anyway!
For few moments keep the world aside....
and come, stand by my side!
Im Waiting and I'll be waiting!"

Im even waiting4 your replies friends.....thank u!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: For the purpose you've given, it's great. What fiance wouldn't love to know that you took the time to write that for him, and think of him.

Send it.