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Give me feedback for this poem?

I stare a hole through the wall
An exchange of image versus desire
To be safe or to be truely loved
To skirt around or bend with teh cliche
Those are the wonderings of my being
My costume and plastic shell only serve to confirm my deespest dread
A torrent of flame divides us
Yet your kiss finds me through the smoke
Your love lifts me to a pedestal
And wipes away my crocodile tears


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like this. Strong statement, clear imagery, very cool...