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This a poem( because i'm bord and read twilight, and new moon too much) what do you think?

i'm floating in an empty sea
this is the last place you left me

tomorrow shall not come to me
nor shine is newfound rays upon me

i'm floating in an empty sea
and i'm the only one it sees

it is a sea of my own misery
a wall you've helped build around me

i'm floating in an empty sea
tied to the bottom with a broken string

i'll never know what really happened to me
or where i've gone or things i've seen
for you took all of me-

i'm floating in an empty sea
this is the last place that you left me


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Excellent poem. This poem tells me of someone who lost someone and that person is sad or depressed about it. That the person is telling this other person that without the him/her they are empty and unfulfilled.