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Here is my first for the day, a story of unrequited desire and love. Comments please.?

alyssa

She came to me one spring day,
Depressed I was, what can I say.
She never ever judged my claim,
Together we became the same.


Alyssa, she finally told me,
A face I may never see.
She is so much younger,
Me,just so much hunger..

Miles seperate our love,
Sent to me from God above.
Her tender words, relaxing,
My lust for her, most taxing.

Never have I felt this way,
Lost for words or what to say.
I love this girl, yes it's true,
Without her, I'm always blue.

We may never come together,
It may be best, never say never.
But the chances I would say,
Better chance, the lottery today.

If I never touch your face,
Your tan body, all in lace.
Your beauty, I may never see,
I know we may never be.

But take the time at least to think,
Enough time to take a drink.
What together we may be,
That is all I ask of thee.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Thats very nice, and I can tell that you care about this girl VERY much, and I'm sure she feels the same way...

but it sounds like she needs some more time to think