My poem The Sun?

Question:

My poem The Sun?

Not sure if it rimes but I'm trying

The Sun

The Sun has shined bright in the sky.
It warms your heart my oh my.
As I watch the birds fly free
I think and wish it were you and me.

High above the building top the sun glow so beautifully.
We cannot wait for the sun to rise
As it warms our hearts in the golden star.

When our sun is shining so brightly we happy and gleefully.
I can't wait for my sun to rise,
I can't wait for the brightness on me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: well, its good, but the rhyming patterns dont correlate. like in the first stanza, it ryhmes in this pattern: AABB

in the second stanze, it doesnt rhyme at all

and in the third stanza, the rhyming pattern is as follows:ABA

but it is a good poem overall